Just sent the book out to a few beta readers. Actually, I think I need at least two or three more who will get me proper feedback. Here’s what I just sent to the beta readers I chose earlier.
Thank you for agreeing to Beta Read Book 2 of the System Apocaypse – Redeemer of the Dead.
Please find attached the book and the Beta Reading worksheet. Please read through the worksheet before you start reading. – it’ll help you understand the kind of questions I have. There’s no need to fill up all the questions but detailed feedback is extremely useful.
As always, the sooner the better on getting feedback to me. However, I need feedback by the 25th of September latest if I am to hit the Nov 1 release data as the end of the month is when I’m booked for my editor.
If you have any questions, please do contact me.
(Have now gotten all the Beta Readers I need for this round. Thanks everybody!)
I’ve seen some posts about whether series will ever be finished. I figured I’d share my version of the answer for the two series I write.
Adventures on Brad – this is probably the one with the least ‘conclusion’ to it since the series is very much more open-ended and meant to follow Daniel on his journey. However, the plan is currently to write each ‘portion’ of his journey in 3 book series with the first 3 books all taking place in Karlak (sort of).
The System Apocalypse – again, this is written in 3 book story arcs with the first 3 books dealing with the Yukon and Whitehorse in particular. Once the first 3 books finish, we’ll be taking the show on the road.
The System Apocalypse has a definite end, though it might take a long time to get there. I’m sort-of patterning it after the Dresden Files series, where yes, there is an end but it’s a LOT of books. I’m hoping to keep everything written in 3 book arcs though so that people can pick it up and read without getting too bogged down but that might break down in later books. We’ll see.
Writing the System Apocalypse Book 2 now and I’m technically on Chapter 7 or so. I started with an outline of what I wanted int he book and that’s going okay, but what I found / have found is that as I write it, more ideas on how to specifically fit in the themes / characters keep coming to me.
It’s why I haven’t posted anything in Royal Road at all since I started writing since I keep jumping back and going – oh yeah, I should add this scene. Or, wait – this character here would make more sense.
Partly I think I’ve got a much better ‘feel’ for the book now that I had when I first started writing for fun. The problem of course is that each time I bounce backwards, it takes longer to finish the book.
Which becomes the question – do I write fast and get a book out or write slower and ake a better book? I’m leaning towards Option 2 since I’d rather have a good book than a not as good book. I’ve seen too many series get worst and since my only is myself, I’d rather make sure this is written well than just dump it out.
Watched Atlas Shrugged Part II. What a horrible, horrible book.
Sadly, the actors weren’t bad for the most part. I’m assuming that they just needed the paycheck – we’ve all done way too much for a paycheck. The directing wasn’t horrible either, in fact the scriptwriting wasn’t bad. So, as a movie adaptation; it wasn’t bad. It was actually pretty okay.
Which means all the sins have to be left at the doorstep of the source material.
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