Coast on Fire, Book 5 of the System Apocalypse
Just wrote ‘The End’ for Book 5. That, of course, is not the end. There’s still at least 3 scenes I have to skip backwards on and add, a bunch of notes and comments where I have to look up details and insert properly (wordings on notifications, etc.). There’s also the major edit to fix tone / add more foreshadowing, etc. But the main plot is down.
At this point, I am also going to be asking for some beta readers. Specifically, I’m looking for beta readers who have prior military experience. There are a few military characters this time and I’d like to make sure they ‘sound’ right. While John and co. aren’t military, there are scenes where the military characters speak with other military individuals, so I want to make sure it works.
Lastly, if you didn’t know – Book 3 (the Cost of Survival) is out on Audiobook!
I am prior military and former CIA. I would be happy to review and give .02 on intermilitary commentary.
hey just wanted to say that i love your books and to keep up the great work! im currently serving in the 82nd so if you want to soundboard just let me know 🙂
sorry was on jump coverage when i posted these. thought the first one didn’t go through so I posted again. didn’t mean to double tap it